Through the tunnel comment

I could not comment on  (http://kayelemani.blogspot.com).i/ will grade you 8/10 because you event is well erranged but there ne one grammer mistake.

I could not comment on (http://kapiyag.blogspot.com).i/ will rate you 7\10 because the event is well arranged and someone can read you summary and can understand wat the sory entails.However there are two spelling error and the answer on the plot is too short .

Through the tunnel comment

I could not comment on (http://getrude-ditas.blogspot.com/) I will grade you 5/10 due to the following reanson: you include unnesesary information on the setting such as  protagonist,antagonist and view of the
narrator and you did not write in the form of paragraph.

I could not comment on will grade you 5/10 due to the following reanson: you include unnesesary information on the setting such as  protagonist,antagonist and view of the
narrator and you did not write in the form of paragraph.

The silk scalf

Setting: the setting of this story is the Oriental Plaza in Johannesburg, a shopping centre where the shops are owned by Indian people during apartheid time.

Plot: The silk scarf display the story of rich wife of the man Clive Nebo who is going to be the foreign minister in the new government. Mrs. .Nebo had her companion fried Margaret. The two ladies were on shopping expedition and entered the portals of the plaza. Mrs. Nebo had her two personal bodyguards , followed the ladies. Mrs. Nebo saw a lovely Indian dress and decided to buy it. Mrs Nebo had been looking for a silk scarf that will match her dress from shop to shop until she came to Moghul Boutique and was shown the silk scarf by a short-gaunt looking man that will match the dress perfectly.Mrs. Nebo when she looked into her hand bag she was 15 rands shorter than the scarf cost. The cash was not enough however ,she had a cheque but the man was deal strictly in cash. The two ladies felt humiliated by the man action, she had the money and her bank account was spiraling and they do not understand why the man does not want to accept but Mr Sakur tried to be fair to anyone whether you are rich or not. The two ladies went on throwing ugly words to the man until the nearest shopkeeper heard a dispute and came to convince Mr Sakur to present the silk scarf to the ladies as a gift Mrs.Nebo was very happy after receiving the gift and thanked the traders.

The main character: Mrs. Nebo, the wife of the man who is going to be the foreigner minister in the new government. She was of the medium height with heavy loins, her smooth –skinned completion having been pampered by beauticians. Mrs. Nebo was very rich. She lived in the white suburb of Houghton .She had two personal bodyguard. Mrs. Nebo had Mercedes Benz.

Through the Tunnel

Setting:The story took place during Jerry's holiday on the beach,where he stayed with his mother for about four days.
Plot:The story is all about a young english boy by the name jerry and his mother , who was a widow. It was during the holiday when they went to relax themselves and had fun together and sun bathing swimmng and he was very excited to go swim at the beach . The first day to the beach,Jerry overswam and he looked exhauated, weak and dizzy. His mother proposed that they should go together the next day, but Jerry did not felt comfortable with the idea , but because he can do nothing, he accepted it. He exercised his lungs as if everything of his depends on it. That night he had a nose bleeding.

Main character:Jerry ,who is an english boy .He was the only child to his mother . Jery was eleven years old . He likes swimming and he never listened to what he is being told . He once dig a hole for himself when he left for the beach withought his mother's concern and he suffered there , bleeding.

my first blogging

It was an owesome exprience to complete my blog.During my creation i was expecting to be asked my ID and student number ,but things came in opposite diretion.It had been driving me crazy everytime ,due to lack of knowledge because any single day I m trying to continue with my blog ,I could not and had to restart  over which is time consuming.First I was not having gmail account which was only requirement to sign in with blog,so created one for my self .In creating this acccount something happen unexpectedly,that is when I am asked to type in my cellphone number,whereby i received a call to give me a code ,unfortunatelly i did not hear them well,therefore I  start over .The next day is when funny part took place .I rushed quicklly  to sign in forgeting that i forgot my password and i still have to start over with heart full of anger.I am very gratefull to complete creating my blog although it was bit challeging.