Sunday, 25 September 2011

Through the Tunnel

Setting:The story took place during Jerry's holiday on the beach,where he stayed with his mother for about four days.
Plot:The story is all about a young english boy by the name jerry and his mother , who was a widow. It was during the holiday when they went to relax themselves and had fun together and sun bathing swimmng and he was very excited to go swim at the beach . The first day to the beach,Jerry overswam and he looked exhauated, weak and dizzy. His mother proposed that they should go together the next day, but Jerry did not felt comfortable with the idea , but because he can do nothing, he accepted it. He exercised his lungs as if everything of his depends on it. That night he had a nose bleeding.

Main character:Jerry ,who is an english boy .He was the only child to his mother . Jery was eleven years old . He likes swimming and he never listened to what he is being told . He once dig a hole for himself when he left for the beach withought his mother's concern and he suffered there , bleeding.

1 comment:

  1. 6/10 because in the plot you left some of the main ideas and you did not finnish the plot.

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